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Sunday, January 29, 2017

Selfish or self care

(hello guys , how are you all? As you know I started my Hindi story but unfortunately I could not justice to story as per your reactions because when I started people have lot of views but after 2,3 part , you people just did  the favour to me by  your likes :)m sorry but I can't stop my words so today again I am going to start a story so please give me a chance and pay your attention 😁)



      

    Part -1

    " Hey dude "- Rohan is doing workout in gym and suddenly , words came to him . Within second Rohan respond "Yo man!"

    Actually it was Akash who is the close friend of Rohan and both are gym partner also .Today he got late so Rohan have started workout and during workout Akash enter and say that line after finishing a set Rohan give response to him and ask the reason "why  you are late today "

    Akash is little bit funny and flirty so he speak in a naughty way "you know Deepti na! Just having chill pill with her ;)"

    Rohan knows everything about him so he is doing workout continuesly.actually Rohan is simple and silent lover guy , he don't care about college girls , affairs or benicial friendships 😂(it happens at college time , no one will accept but it happen ) that's not mean Rohan is borring or study lover or brilliant student , no he loves to live alone that is why he spend most of his time in hostel room ,his rommiee also feel why he is so different from others but no one want to ask because sometimes he do speak , also he do speak funny Thoughts .He is helpful much but he never intrect with neighbors .

    His Daily routine is very small.

    Go to college after that return back to hostel then go to gym that's it .Classmates feel amaze when he don't speak a single word in gossip groups that's not mean he keep silent whole day , he speak to all but it happens when anyone try to intrect first .May be he is still observing the behaviour of people because he is new in college ,people are from different different states . Rohan never share anything about him ,if anyone tries to ask then he passes a huge smile and divert the question smoothly because tricks are in his hand and he is master in talkology (I just use this term because he know how to play with words but he speak rarely to anyone .)

    One thing is common , everyone is addict of social media , same like that Rohan also love to spend time on social sites .

    Life is passing around with time ,one day he was just sitting in room and wifi connection was failed because of disaster and there is no chance to restart the wifi till night , as you know  now days wifi is the "sanjivni booti " in hostels , because people do watch movies , surfing,chatting most of their time , I can't say it is habit or time pass . Rohan was also greeting bore ,actually the term bore comes after 20's now a 10 year old child say "oh mom !I am getting bore today what should I do "  :mrgreen:

    As you know  youth can live without food or water but without data they can't spend 2-3 hours so finally Rohan decided to subscribe a small netpack ,which contains small amount of data but it is enough to spend 3-4 hours on WhatsApp so he just activated the pack and start the internet connection of his smartphone after that notifications start ringing . He ignored all and first of all opened the WhatsApp , bulk of group messages came with in seconds and list was changing continuesly and suddenly Rohan saw a  number without any name and he don't open it because display picture was not there . He thought may be contact is not in my phone that's why it is not showing dp so he saved that number randomly in list and came back to WHATSAPP but still dp was not there now he opened the chat ,there were two messages "hiii"at 9pm and second one was " are you there " at 9:45pm .He was failed to identify that number as you know it is not normal situation for a guy 😂😂😂I know girl get lot of direct messages like this but for a guy is surprise . 

    .....To be continue 

    © Confused Thoughts

    (I know  you read this story till end so. I expect honest reactions from all of you ,if story was borring then without any fear ping me sure I will stop writing stories 😂😂😂and you can give your suggestions ,corrections also .

    Thank you )

    31 comments:

    1. Hi again... Pehle toh mai aapse poochna chahungi ki apne woh kahani likhna band kyu kar diya? Dost, kabhi kabhar zindagi mein aise bhi pal aate hain jab aapko har taraf se sirf badduyaein aur badnaseebi he milti hai. Par iska yeh matlab nahi ki aap ghutne tek de. Uthao kalam aur khatam karo us kahani ko. I love it and I want to still read it. I know maine kaha tha ki main aapko urdu ke shabd point out karungi, par pichle 2 hafton se main kaam mein kuch masroof thi, iss karan na woh kar saki, na hi aapki kahani aage padh saki. Isliye please, aapse iltija hai ki aap wapas se us kahani ko likhna shuru kar de.

      As for this kahani, it sounds interesting, but its rather short to hook attention of most readers. Next time se, thoda aur lamba aur dilchasp lekh likhiye. Hope that helped :)

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    2. Mam aisa kuch ni h , mujhe bhi aduri kahani pasand ni hai
      M use Puri krunga vo b pure justice k sath bss thoda tym lgega
      Apka itna Acha response dekhkar mujhe motivation mila h ab shayad m aur ache SE likh paun.aur Rahi baat ISS story ki to sorry bolunga mene sirf chota sa intro hi dia tha mgr next part will be pretty fine , I think so .
      Thank you so much mam

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    3. You're welcome 😊. I'll wait for the next parts of both the stories 😀

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    4. Haan meri b koshish yhi h k kuch acha likhu 🙏🙏🙏

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    5. I love it! It was funny! I love it because it sounds like a one and one conversation in real life. I think that you have a good sense of storytelling, which is great! Keep writing buddy! :)

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    6. You are welcome! Thank you for posting! :)

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    7. It means alot to me , in next part I will have to improve it more and more

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    8. Hey writer! have nominated you for The Mystery Blogger Award. Check out my post for info.
      xx

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    9. Story is going great.
      But you need to create the flow.
      I'm no one to advise you don't take it as advise, it's just my view.

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    10. Your advices are valuable for me ! It's wp and every reader is also a writer , you gave the honest review which I needed
      I am sorry About it next time I will try to make a perfect flow !
      Keep reading , and doing same
      🙏🙏🙏

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    11. Don't be sorry. You are a great writer. And I know, you'll write the best.
      ALL THE BEST TO YOU....

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    12. Thank you so much for such kinda motivation!
      🙏🙏🙏🙏

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    13. Nice Hindi story...
      does Rohan... depicts you??

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    14. Two answers
      First one is

      Yes
      Second one is no

      Actually Rohan is the virtual character but when I am writing the story that time I feel like I am playing his role .
      So let's see how better I can act

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    15. I seems to have missed so many of you blogs post...
      I'm finding it strange because I'm following you..
      you should be showing up in my reader..????

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    16. Hehehe so nice of you !
      It shows your honesty with your followers , actually I never miss your blog so rarely unread post will be there

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    17. I know.. that's why I so confused 🤷‍♀️ as to why I'm not seeing yours..
      I checked my reader everyday to catch up on my follows. And try to read and comment...
      but I will keep going back to your page to ensure that I don't anymore

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    18. Oh !
      So kind of you , it OK sometimes it happen unknowingly we miss the post because of traffic and I am so sorry I also do much post in Hindi font

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    19. I would like to know what happened next... Please come up with the next part soon... :-)

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    20. Thank you so much for such kinda lines !
      Because of college timing I get late
      But I will write asap 🙏🙏

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